Eigene Rockballade: 'Little Village' [trommel_friiK]

Hey Trommelfreunde

Hab mir mal "kurz" nen Text überlegt, mein Vadda hat die Melodie komponiert und denn hab ich noch nen büschken getrommelt: Das ist dabei raus gekommen:

P.S.: Ja , das is meine Stimme ;D

Remastered Version: Komm, lass hören!

Songtext:

I grew up with you , like a little tree
I came along with you
You showed me to be free

I really care 'bout you
Mhm... can't you see
That you're , the place I wanna be
[ooh...]

Little Village, please stand by me
If I'm down you're raisin' me...
Up
Be my Friend , hold my hand
Little Village , be my friend
Little Village hold my hand
[ooh...]

I almost know , all your streets
All my memories
they rest in peace

If you were bigger
Nobody could see
that you're , the place I wanna be
[ooh...]

Little Village, please stand by me
If I'm down you're raisin' me...
up
Be my Friend , hold my hand
Little Village , be my friend
Little Village hold my hand
[ooh...]

Little Village, please stand by me
If I'm down you're raisin' me...
up
Be my Friend , hold my hand
Little Village , be my friend
Little Village hold my hand
[ooh...]

Bitte um angemessene Kritik

Zitat

Original von Jaggerblack
Hör dir mal den Song von Eagle Eye Cherry "Save tonight" an. Gewisse Ähnlichkeiten.......

Hey Jaggerblack,

wüsste nicht welche Ähnlichkeiten Save Tonight (klick) haben soll?

Bitte erläutere mir das doch noch mal

Zum DeEsser: Mein Magix Music Maker hat sowas glaub ich nicht! :baby: